Squeaky is the main character in Toni
Cade Bambara’s story,
“Raymond’s Run.” She is the character I will be
analyzing. She changes from being an insecure, arrogant fighter to a
respectful, confident girl. The reason she changes is because she watches her brother
run his first race and she realizes that he’s a good runner.
At the beginning
of the story, Squeaky is tough and arrogant. She says to her enemy, Gretchen,
“I win cause I’m the best” (23). This shows that she
is arrogant and rude to others. She also challenges Gretchen and her sidekicks
by saying, “That’s right, Fatso. And the next word out of anybody and I’ll be
their mother too” (20). Here she shows that she truly is tough and she is not
just talk. The girls back away in fear, too intimidated to respond to her
challenge.
The reader
quickly discovers, however, that Squeaky acts this way only because she’s
hiding her true insecurities. She’s embarrassed that she has no friends and
she’s jealous of Gretchen because she has friends and is a good runner. After
leaving the confrontation, Squeaky says that she continues down Broadway, “with
not a care in the world because I am Miss Quicksilver herself.” Here, it is
obvious that she really does care, and that she can’t even admit it to herself.
All she has is her brother Raymond, and although she cares about him, she
doesn’t respect him enough to be a friend.
By the end of
the story, Squeaky is a completely different person. She respects Gretch and Raymond and she has become confident in herself.
“Cause she’s good, no doubt about it.” Instead of rubbing it in that she won,
she can compliment Gretchen and give her a true smile. She also learns to
respect Raymond. As she watches him climb the fence after the race, she
realizes, “Raymond would make a very fine runner” (27). She’s ready to give up
running to coach Raymond because she has many other things she can be good at.
She is no longer so insecure about herself that she has to be the best runner.
Squeaky changes
so drastically because she finally realizes that her brother is a true runner.
As she watches him run, she realizes that he has his own style and that he is
really good at something. This makes her realize that her brother has problems
a lot worse than she does. She can now help her brother and not worry so much
about herself. She can also make some friends.
In the end,
Squeaky realizes that girls can be real and that can make friends. She learns
some important lessons and she’s a better person by the end.